here is where I begin to feel
all the familiar airs
that rush of woodsy musk
the heady hint of rum
they’ve assembled
here at thin wrists
and between breasts
to intermingle with thrums
low hums of pulse points
with infectious restlessness
and I am left as emerald-breasted
as ruby-throated as the hummingbird
we caught only glimpses of
amid the summer quince
© Sarah Whiteley
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January 23, 2012 at 5:26 am
Martin Shone
Stunning – “thrums.. of pulse points …” – with scented memories, seal this longing poem – stunning words.
January 23, 2012 at 9:52 am
Marian
it is getting hot in here.
January 23, 2012 at 1:17 pm
slpmartin
Such passion in these lines.
January 23, 2012 at 6:29 pm
lazfreedman
Beautiful Sarah!
Peace,
Laz
February 5, 2012 at 10:53 pm
ebbtide
thank you, Laz
January 24, 2012 at 4:16 am
belfastdavid
WOW!!!!
I need to cool down now
David
January 30, 2012 at 2:53 pm
Ebby
I haven’t visited your page for ages but I’m glad I popped back today.
You have clearly worked this piece, internal rhyme and use of parallelism adds such a depth to clear description that one can’t fail to pick up on the poetic voice’s mood. I particularly like how the sibilance ties the heat of the words with a hushed cooling, hissing thread. Very nicely done.
February 5, 2012 at 10:53 pm
ebbtide
I’m glad you popped back!! thank you!
January 31, 2012 at 10:57 am
hames1977
dear sarah,
such exquisite description of bodily feelings
great write!
February 5, 2012 at 10:53 pm
ebbtide
very kind,… thank you very much