mind travel

in all the why’s
I have traveled
through all the how’s
I’ve ever been
no matter where
I’ve never seen
a when so sweet
as then

© Sarah Whiteley

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12 thoughts on “mind travel

  1. This is excellent. Reminds me so much of Emily Dickinson. Not to be pedantic though, but aren’t the apostrophes unnecessary? Just some constructive criticism, but honestly I love this.

    1. Actually, I added the apostrophes on purpose (call it artistic license) in the vein of “crossing your t’s and dotting your i’s”… glad you enjoyed in spite of the extra punctuation.

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