so what are we to do
we two?
you over there
me right here
you with the woodpecker
perched in your birch
and I with the crows
flying in fractured arrows
home
so what do we say
anyway?
you were then
I am now
you with the trees
ringed round the yard
and I with the streets
cracked and scarred
alone
and so who am I
this time?
I who was yours
once and then
you who were mine
again and when
our time was not mine
is no longer
yours
© Sarah Whiteley
lovely , well expressed feelings due to seperation.
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This was very lovely and quiet. I love the first stanza; the last five lines in that stanza are the best I’ve read in a long time.
Quite wonderful.
Pearl
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Thank you, Pearl.
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i really enjoyed the last stanza especially. it’s like a fractured song, a lament, even, confusion and pain seeping through every word. wonderful!
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Very nicely phrased poem that captures those feelings of seperation…enjoyed it very much!
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oh i like this..it’s like a converation between two friends who are so compfortable with each other.
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glad you enjoyed!
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