to one who waited
quiet as dust
hidden and pale
as peonies biding time
beneath March rains
I heard the scuttle
of your yearning
crossing the grass
beneath pale water skies
our unutterances
have left us
without bearing
and meager
as hungry
for one another
as spring buds
for a nearer sun
© Sarah Whiteley
very beautiful piece, ebbtide
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Made me think of lovers who finally come together after being apart for a long time…enjoyed it.
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yeah, i got the same thing as slpmartin. like.
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yes and thank you 🙂
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The images individually are gentle and yet the impact of the whole is powerful.
Terrific poem
David
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nice! thanks for that, David! I like the idea that what I write can sneak up on a person and then WHAM! well,… maybe not so much WHAM as BOO! 🙂
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Perfect, Sarah.
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I really dig this one, Sarah 🙂
Peace to you,
Laz
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many thanks, Laz! love the kindness of your words
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I like the contrast between the words and the emotion of this poem. Very fine write, Sarah.
Ciao, Francina
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I loved reading this poem out loud.
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Hi Sarah
This is beautiful, I like the passion underneath the calm surface 🙂
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dear sarah,
shall i say, i waited too… simply breath-taking poem 🙂
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thank you! 🙂
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