there is something
that has been lost
the elms tell it
when the wind is high
and twisting through
the yellow leaves with
the restless uncertainty
of long-parted lovers
and mid-arabesque a cloud
of starlings senses an absence
so suddenly they are startled
into unaccustomed silence
while daily now the birch
weep their griefs into piles
for the dark-eyed juncos
to skitter through
casting about the damp
as if to descry what it is
we have somehow missed
there is something
that has been lost
and every bright leaf
bends to remind us what
we would know it
if only we stopped
long enough to listen
if we could only
still ourselves
enough to hear
as it slips by
© Sarah Whiteley
“if we could only still ourselves enough to hear as it slips by” Exactly.
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Exactly exactly… you picked exactly what this whole piece was about. 🙂
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“the restless uncertainty of long-parted lovers…” What a wonderful line in a wonderful poem.
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A melancholy autumnal lament – love the startled starlings ‘and mid-arabesque a cloud of starlings senses an absence so suddenly they are startled’ Sarah, your images are always so beautiful – K
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Thank you, Kathleen! 🙂
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hm, that feeling that there is something wrong, something missing.. it’s terrifyingly peaceful and you put it beautifully. Great poem
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Your poetry is so lovely! I’m battling writer’s block, but reading yours stirs the muse….
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Writer’s block is rough – but I’ve no doubt you’ll come through it with something brilliant! 🙂
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Thanks for the encouragement! 🙂
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What a lovely reflection ‘if only we could still ourselves.’ Beautiful poem. Thank-you.
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