I had determined
(after the last)
to no longer offer up
the root of myself
let it beat
(I thought)
for nothing other than
to mark the time
passing beneath my skin
but then hands
(so mercilessly capable)
dug in and I am as earth
freshly turned and raw
and the root
(remembering yearning)
has caught the rain of you
and strains again
toward sun
© Sarah Whiteley
I more than simply liked this. If I was still finding time to run page “The Pick Of The Month’s Newly Discovered Beauties” (https://bennaga.wordpress.com/the-pick-of-this-months-newly-discovered-poems/) your piece would have made the grade.
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🙂 that’s very kind of you! thank you!
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As Ben so aptly implies…this is indeed a rare and beautiful poem..I’ve read it aloud several times so I might savor it.
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thank you, Charles!
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ooohhhhhhhh.
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definitely ooohhhhhhh 🙂 and maybe some aahhhhhh too!
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hearts and flowers!
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A perfection of its kind. Congratulations, Sarah!
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thank you, Cynthia!
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Beautiful! Sarah 🙂
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🙂
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I admire the control in these lines, Sarah, the emotion strong but in harness.
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