February 21, 2017 by ebbtide

afterthought

Poetry
afterthought, change, friendship, growth, life, love, parentheses, poem, Poetry, relationships
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simple parentheses
could not hold you

yo(u outgrew th)em

and can no longer be called
an afterthought

© Sarah Whiteley

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slpmartin February 21, 2017 at 11:36 pm

Just love the structure of the poem!

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Ben Naga March 3, 2017 at 8:34 am

Ingenious.

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Thomas Davis March 30, 2017 at 2:36 pm

Wonderful, clever, poetry and beautiful art.

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Betty Hayes Albright April 1, 2017 at 9:20 pm

Clever – I love this!

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