remember afternoon sun cures morning’s
damper specimens
for a bigger blaze, find an ally
to help gather
wet pieces can also be cured
by sharing laughter
but only if you share laughter
long enough
some pieces show more promise
than others
but do not discard dry grasses
as useless
recall that these encourage
a better burn
as with anything in life,
start small
and be wary of smothering,
when adding more
be mindful where you place
the most weight
and if you find that your fire
is faltering,
return to the simple honesty
of grasses
when all finally burns bright
beneath the dark,
sit beside the most kindred mind
you can find,
share the amiable heat of your labor,
and pause
to remark upon the enormousness
of the sky
© Sarah Whiteley
Another wonderful poem. Your use of enjambment always adds a richer meaning to each line (which I love). Perfect ending lines too! Your poetry is always most enjoyable.
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What a lovely thing to say. 🙂 Thank you!
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You’re welcome! (I keep wondering if our paths ever crossed in Seattle area poetry circles. There were a couple of groups that gave live readings all over the place… But that was awhile back.)
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You never know! It’s been a while since I’ve been out and about in that regard. We might just have to have a coffee and a chat one of these days.
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I’d enjoy that! Except that we just moved 130 miles south, after a lifetime up there. If you’re ever in the Longview area though…! Your poetry is outstanding and I’m glad to have found you here, at least.
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Just completed reading The Hunger Games. Resonates.
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