days stretched out so long, they toppled
off the end of the weathered dock
into the spring-fed cold at Sleepy Eye
among the shadows between the pilings
swam the uncatchable ghost of a walleye
(suitably fish-tale-sized)
someone years past had called Walter
every summer we saw him jump,
breaking the lake at dusk, just offshore
where the small-flies gathered
in their short-lived, tiny-winged hordes
at the splash “it’s Walter!”
we’d gasp and sit properly awed
while we envisioned the sort of net
that might finally nab him
the “growed-up” me is somewhat relieved
Walter’s remained a fish-ish myth,
dodging all the efforts and lures
of the great northern fisherman
this way, he’s stayed a childhood tale –
of firefly nights among hundred-year pines
and the hollow sound of wooden oars
striking the sides of a kid-captained boat
© Sarah Whiteley
This is WONDERFUL–and I’m not even a fish person!
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Moving memories.
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Delightful childhood memories woven into these lines.
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I love the myths we grew up with that we refuse to dispense with in the light of adult knowledge.
Did I ever tell you about Finn McCool, the giant who built the Giants Causeway off the coast of Northern Ireland!! 🙂
David
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This is brilliant. Thank you. May I “reblog” it?
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thank you! yes, you may 🙂
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Oh those wooden oars, and the kid-captained boat….just lovely, Sarah…I can see the fireflies and remember the tall tales….
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some of my best memories are of those summers 🙂 I miss fireflies! unfortunately, there aren’t any out here
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Reblogged this on Ben Naga.
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Beautifully written poetry. Wonderful metaphors.
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Excellent. You took me right back to my childhood.
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Lovely. Reminds me of our woods/lake life in Maine.
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